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Small truths
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
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Friday, 21st November 2003 @ 12:43:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Deceitful eyes
I've looked into them so long
searching for completion , but yet
I'm left with nothing but a broken heart
and your worthless lies and broken promises
JENNA
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PhantomVampyress
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2003-11-21 12:43:50]
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Re: Small truths
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by doug on
Friday, 21st November 2003 @ 02:37:47 PM AEST
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| short but very good, look forward to more your friend doug |
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Re: Small truths
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st November 2003 @ 03:37:43 PM AEST
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Sometimes the truth can be a very ugly thing. Good write
Broken-glass |
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Re: Small truths
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by EmSal on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 12:06:43 AM AEST
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The eyes can tell all...short write but good. Thanks for sharing.
Emma. |
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