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Regal Fall
Contributed by
gee
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Friday, 21st November 2003 @ 03:47:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Regal Fall
I was your prince, once upon a time
your knight in shining armour
the one you told the world you loved
couldn't live without, or now with it seems.
Would you feed me to the sharks
just to watch my blood run red
or would you feast upon my anquish
knowing you have the upper hand.
Crimson stripes across my cheek
bears witness to your darker self.
Daggers of hate pierce my heart
pain strangles my breath.
What could I have said or done
to reap this viscious thrust
or was this just a planned charade
to free you from a listless life?
Visions of grandeur mighty warriors see
before great battles call to arms.
Here I lay upon my field of dreams
left lifeless as the fallen foe.
Frost of winter cannot cool the burn
nor heal my broken heart
though the darkness of this fateful night
shall cloak my pride from intrusive eyes.
Copyright ©
gee
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2003-11-21 15:47:27]
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Re: Regal Fall
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by EmSal on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 12:09:01 AM AEST
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I thought this was good...good vivid images too...cloaking your pride...good use of words. Interesting...
Thanks for sharing.
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Re: Regal Fall
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 08:31:39 AM AEST
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Oh Yes!!!! This sounds really good now... Especially loved the last line..
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