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Closing and Losing
Contributed by
Exodus-On-Life
on
Friday, 21st November 2003 @ 10:47:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Closing time on my life
Closing all the doors and tossing all the keys
Losing my
Only way to think about you
Closing time on my life
Building all the barriers
Burning all the bridges
Losing my
Only way to inhibit my mind
Closing time of my life
Fragile yet and make me so
Making my
Only way to make it
Moving to the ocean
Meeting all the ends
Ends of the world
And ends to me
Float away to nowhere
Closing all the doors
Moving my feet to somewhere
Losing my
Only way to find you
Lock me from the house
Finding my way to meet you
Break all of the light bulbs
Pour water in all the sockets
Lose our light forever
Hide the key in our pockets
I know who I'm losing
And I know who I've found
I know who I'm searching for
And why my feet float off the ground
Closing down on my life
Just as clouds do
I think once I close myself on nothing
I think I'll come find you
Make my path and lose my way
Closing time on my life
Come so close to the edge
Closing down on eternity
Nothing lasts forever
But these feelings come so close
Closing down on my logic
Where I choose to open
Close this last door tomorrow
I could meet you today
Never knowing what happens
Life turns it's key in anyway
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2003-11-21 22:47:54]
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Re: Closing and Losing
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by emystar on
Friday, 21st November 2003 @ 11:49:03 PM AEST
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Very artistic write.
Hang tuff.
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: Closing and Losing
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by EmSal on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 12:12:55 AM AEST
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Wow I liked this...although a sensative subject. Great write thank you for sahring this. Take care.
Emma. |
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