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I'll always love you
Contributed by
harshreality
on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 12:25:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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On the way home with the radio on.
The end of another long day,
And reality starts to set in-
Hoping the lyrics will make my pain easier to
Endure.
It's harder at night with no distractions;
Before I know it,
I'm consumed by memories again...
There seems to be no cure.
If only I could keep my emotions under control,
Maybe I would see things more clearly.
All logic is gone when I'm feeling this way,
No use trying to reason with my lost soul.
I cannot win-
I know b/c I've tried...
I'll always love you; It's evident...
This feeling in my heart will not allow itself to Be denied.
Copyright ©
harshreality
... [
2003-11-22 00:25:08]
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Re: I'll always love you
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by ShadowDaughter on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 12:33:00 AM AEST
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Hey, I like this. "No use trying to reason with my lost soul". Elegantly done, nice job. Keep it up!
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Re: I'll always love you
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by EmSal on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 12:35:43 AM AEST
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The heart can be so stubborn...should we listen to our heart or our mind? Both can cause pain. This was a good write. I can relate to what you are talking about. All the best.
Emma. |
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Re: I'll always love you
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by Rachel on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 12:40:17 AM AEST
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| I really like this, and can relate completly. Especially to the line "Its harder at night with no distractions." Very well written too. |
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Re: I'll always love you
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 06:44:31 PM AEST
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The first write if yours I read and I find this pearl. It's as if you took the thoughts from my mind. Very well done
Larry |
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Re: I'll always love you
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by swiftsouljah on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 01:09:21 PM AEST
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| this is a play by play of my life... |
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