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Crawling Crawling Creeping
Contributed by
deadly_blaZe
on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 12:40:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Crawling Crawling Creeping
Your words - seeping to my brain
Slower n slower my heart beats
Unsteadily from the pain
Crawling Crawling Creeping
Your lies - to much to bear
Murdered from the pain u cause
My sleeve has no heart to wear
Crawling Crawling Creeping
Haunted by the emptiness
Fueled by your heartlessness
I shall rise and you will meet your end
Crawling Crawling Creeping
My fingers - on ur skin
Tracing the outline of ur lips
The soul source of the sins within
Crawling Crawling Creeping
Thoughts of revenge so bittersweet
I gaze at you from lifeless eyes
That have long since forgotten
The meaning of remorse n how to cry
Crawling Crawling Creeping
My fingers around your throat
You gasp my name and plead with your eyes
: Sweet Misery :
Understand there is no hope
No More Crawling
No More Creeping
Ive silenced your pulse
Put an end to our pain
No More Crawling
No More Creeping
ill never see your face again
ill never hear your voice again
Im Glad to say
This Is Finally The End
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deadly_blaZe
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2003-11-22 00:40:13]
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Re: Crawling Crawling Creeping
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by Terry_Stephen_Driscoll on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 08:27:36 AM AEST
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As out of the can this genre of subject is, I thought it deserved comment. It reads well and is helped along by its rhythym. I think it works as 'angry' as it seems to want to be.
Good stuff
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