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Broken

Contributed by bleedingXrose on Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 09:17:09 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Broken life
Broken heart
Broken girl
Torn apart

Broken way
Broken soul
Broke world
That was never whole

Tearing eyes
Fearing ways
Scarring wounds
Burn and blaze

Leave me alone
Leave me be
Cause I'm not worthy
Of your sympathy

Copyright © bleedingXrose ... [ 2003-11-22 09:17:09]
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Re: Broken (User Rating: 1 )
by Alexander_McDonald on Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 09:27:34 AM AEST
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I liked your poem. Reminds me of my own.

Write from the heart. Even if it hurts to read... Gotta let out the pain.

Alex.

Re: Broken (User Rating: 1 )
by SkYYBLu on Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 10:09:46 AM AEST
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Ditto. Good write. So short, yet describes so much pain. Keep 'em comin'!

Re: Broken (User Rating: 1 )
by harshreality on Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 12:27:02 PM AEST
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very good, I can relate.

Re: Broken (User Rating: 1 )
by deadly_blaZe on Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 05:17:53 PM AEST
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Short But Sweet. Very Nice. Cant Wait 4 More

XxEricaxX

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