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A Place
Contributed by
Ewin
on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 03:03:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I wish there was a place I could just go
a place where I could hide from everything
when things go wrong
when thing get hard to even think about it all
I wish there was a place where I could go and forget it all
a place where all my dreams come true
where all my falures never existed
a place where no one could find me
a place where no one could hear my crying
or even my screaming
I wish there was a place where my light could be found
a place where it could shine so brightly
where I could smile so grand
where I could be happy again
a place where my life could have some meaning
a place where I am always wanted
I wish there was a place where no one would judge me
a place where no one would put me down,
just because of the way I look or act
a place where they will accept me for me
where there are people like me
where I could say something and be understood
I wish there was a place
just a place where I could go
a place to get away from "you"-
"you people" who judge me so
a place where I could just lay my head down and die
a place so peaceful and quiet,
no more screaming in that place of mine
that place would be my tomb
oh how I wish there was a place like that.
Copyright ©
Ewin
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2003-11-22 15:03:04]
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Re: A Place
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by Exodus-On-Life on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 03:09:55 PM AEST
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Great write.
I also understand the want for somewhere else to go.
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Re: A Place
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by Aika on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 03:25:18 PM AEST
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Great writing! I loved a lot!!
it is just problem of this world, acceptance of easy rule : Live and let live would save this world. I wish you found this place, just small, but inside of yourself, a wonderful place where you can be happy or cry, if you need or want. I created my own inside world, if I need, I go there. My inside paradise. Wish you were happy! aika:-) |
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