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jack frost
Contributed by
Merry
on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 03:19:26 PM in AEST
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a pattern on the windowpane
my icy fingers trace
the frozen filligree
until the sun melts it away
i strain to see the artist
who painted this for me
but he is long gone and distant
before i rose from sleep
i wonder did he watch over me
drawing pictures while i dreamt
was he the shadow in the dark
the prince i could not see?
will he return with steamy breath
to greet the frosty morn
his words are woven in the mist
imprinted as a kiss
gmm2003
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Merry
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2003-11-22 15:19:26]
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Re: jack frost
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by mckayla on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 03:38:12 PM AEST
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I remember thinking like this when i was a child. I loved the pictures it made!! Great write!!
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Re: jack frost
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 03:53:28 PM AEST
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Another beautiful write Merry... as always the picture you paint with your words captivates me. :o)
Larry
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Re: jack frost
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by emystar on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 04:42:27 PM AEST
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Beautifull, romantic, good write!
Very good!
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: jack frost
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by norm on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 05:18:04 PM AEST
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A super wonderful glorious write
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I'm sorry, oh so sorry, me,
now no longer can I see,
your nicey, icy filligree
I live these days in Floridee
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Re: jack frost
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by DreamWeaver on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 09:18:17 PM AEST
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| Lovely write Merry ... great imagery ... Jan |
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Re: jack frost
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by maryetta on
Monday, 1st December 2003 @ 02:48:26 AM AEST
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i really enjoyed this poem, very good write indeed.
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Re: jack frost
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by bernard on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 02:41:37 AM AEST
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No icy comments on this delightful poem great write I enjoyed it very much thanks.
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Re: jack frost
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by Archie on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 05:48:31 AM AEST
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| This is a very cool write. |
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Re: jack frost
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by New_York_Chick on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 03:53:55 PM AEST
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| awww that's such a sweet poem!!!!! |
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Re: jack frost
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by Infamous on
Thursday, 16th February 2006 @ 06:17:48 AM AEST
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| capivating! |
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Re: jack frost
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by windowguy on
Sunday, 12th April 2009 @ 11:56:50 AM AEST
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| Excellent description. |
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