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Rain
Contributed by
Eve
on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 10:00:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Cumulonimbus comes rolling in
They play their song of thunder
"Let the rain begin"
Falling down so quietly before they drop
Onto the ground they make their sound
And never stop
Imaginary ryhmes carry on the wind
Whistling their mournful tune
Around each bend
Let me fly and tough the sky
Lie on a cloud
Listening to the rainsong where it's never loud
I'm stranded here on earth
But sometimes I don't mind
I can use imagination and sometimes find
That it's better when we're limited;
We can think much more
About what it'd be like otherwise-
But you open your own door.
Cumulonimbus comes rolling in
They play their song of thunder
"Let the rain begin"
Falling down so quietly until they drop
Onto the ground they make their sound
And never stop
Make up your own ending on this rainy day
When the the storm clouds come out
With the rain to waltz and play
Copyright ©
Eve
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2003-11-22 22:00:27]
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Re: Rain
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by Rissa on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 10:42:42 PM AEST
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"Let me fly and tough the sky
Lie on a cloud
Listening to the rainsong where it's never loud"
I like that part best. o_O Nice poem, Eveh. |
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Re: Rain
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 05:35:56 AM AEST
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wonderful imagery
Shari |
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Re: Rain
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 06:27:55 AM AEST
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| Beautifully written. It is like a painting with words. Superb! |
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Re: Rain
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by ItalianLove on
Sunday, 4th December 2011 @ 05:04:12 PM AEST
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| Amazing :') |
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