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Driven
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
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Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 08:55:09 AM in AEST
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Through pouring rain,she drove one night
Without direction,all alone
Along the endless stretch of road
That was taking her far from home
She tried to reason with herself
It's just better to forget
But all the feelings kept clouding 'round
So she lit a cigarette
Inhaling deep as she does with all
Never a taste,always too much
Exhaling with a smokey sigh
As her thoughts began to rush
The driving rain kept it up
Relentless in its force
Blurring the windscreen,her vision impaired
The storm showed no remorse
Unable to make out where it was
The road seemed to disappear
She tried to concentrate really hard
But the hurt was stronger than fear
Turning up the radio
She heard a familiar song
Tears welled up,yet still she smiled
And started to sing along
Lost now in the memories
Somewhere in the past
She was crying uncontrollably
And driving way too fast
The song it just took over
Taking her back to when
She wore the smile he gave to her
So she wouldnt have to pretend
As lightening cracked across the sky
She caught a momentary glimpse
Of the countryside that surrounded her
And the bend that she just missed
It was too late for screaming
So she just went with the flow
And as she plunged into the darkness
Still she sang "Desert Rose"
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LovingWhispers
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2003-11-23 08:55:09]
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Re: Driven
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 09:06:48 AM AEST
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| Dark, sad, and beautiful. Awesome poem. I can never think of any words great enough to descibe your poetry. Magnificent poem! |
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Re: Driven
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 09:40:15 AM AEST
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I remember this one.....no matter what you wrtie it turns out a masterpiece.
Larry |
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Re: Driven
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by Lone_er on
Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 11:43:40 AM AEST
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| An awesome write maam. A beautiful but sad ode to love. I plunged into darkness with her. Excellent--Russ |
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Re: Driven
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 05:36:37 PM AEST
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WOW!! This was an awesome write, Whispers.... I felt like I was on that drive with you..
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Driven
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 03:05:32 AM AEST
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| wow and wow! i wasnt expecting that ending! lol! soo exceptional this poem! hugs, love n' moosh, nessa x |
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