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The Blade on My Skin
Contributed by
poison_touch666
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Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 02:06:32 PM in AEST
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I slit my wrists and watch the blood drip slowly down,
Reminds me I'm still alive, still breathing,
Why won't I stop bleeding,
Why can't I stop cutting.
I tell myself what I real am,
Hit myself for what I've accepted,
I tell others about what I've done,
Every word like a blade on my skin.
They say talking will help,
Just hurts more than ever now,
Want a cure need one or I'll die,
Stop this torumenting pain,
Please.
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Re: The Blade on My Skin
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by scarykitten on
Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 02:24:01 PM AEST
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| I like it it is very deep |
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Re: The Blade on My Skin
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by saphire on
Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 02:56:45 PM AEST
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| Very good...really sad, and you have a way of revealing your feelings! Great work...keep it up! |
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Re: The Blade on My Skin
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by emystar on
Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 05:24:28 PM AEST
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Well, I can't say I like it but it's written very well.
the reason I want say I like is that it really troubles 2 hear this.
Ya gotta change your attitude about yourself.
#1 if ya quit using the 666 u can get victor'y over the demon that tortures u day and nite.
Jus because u have an illness don't make u a bad person. Princess Dianna did that too but no one I know held it against her, certainly not me!
I do understand it but maybe together we can find u some hope and confidence that u can do anything that you set your mind too.
Hang tuff!
peace, joy, luv, hope, faith,
emy |
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Re: The Blade on My Skin
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by alecfernadez on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 06:27:49 AM AEST
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| a very good poem, and its nice to see that poets are writing about their lives with such feeling. Dont try to stop cutting before you find something to replace it with, becuase In most cases cutting is a self control/coping habit that people take. Some people like me just cut because we/they hate themselves. |
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