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Oceans of Forever
Contributed by
doug
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Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 03:14:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
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trembling hearts
whispers and soft kisses
tender dreams and wishes
only lovers know
never apart
melted now together
written into forever
thats how lovers go
together now
passion on their faces
they walk in secret places
where the ivory grows
swept away
for worse or for better
in oceans of forever
only lovers know
Copyright ©
doug
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2003-11-23 15:14:59]
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Re: Oceans of Forever
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 03:17:34 PM AEST
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Wow, this is such a great write, doug.... you did fantastic =)
The description is used well... not overdoing it, not underdoing it, but just right....
Very well done....
God bless,
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Re: Oceans of Forever
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by Merry on
Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 03:27:45 PM AEST
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gotta love love!!!! It's a wonderful thing, it makes the world go round!!!!
Nice write
your friend
merry |
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Re: Oceans of Forever
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by emystar on
Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 04:33:29 PM AEST
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Hi doug,
This is beautifull-n-heavenly.
Great peice of art.
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: Oceans of Forever
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by harshreality on
Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 04:42:49 PM AEST
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| I'm what you would call a hopeless romantic and that was sooo sweet. |
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Re: Oceans of Forever
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by LovingWhispers on
Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 04:46:50 PM AEST
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Beautifully mysterious..."only lovers know"
Love that!
Whole write is just real nice
Sharon |
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Re: Oceans of Forever
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by Joy on
Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 05:08:10 PM AEST
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| Beautifully written!! |
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Re: Oceans of Forever
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 05:24:57 PM AEST
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| dearest doug, excellent poem and title too:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Oceans of Forever
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by venkat on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 12:36:51 AM AEST
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| mmm..very beautiful write. venkat |
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Re: Oceans of Forever
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by Wrybod on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 01:44:51 PM AEST
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Phew what a relief from the last one I read. Great versitility and took me back to a girl I knew a long time ago. Nice one!
bob |
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Re: Oceans of Forever
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by arden on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 05:12:50 PM AEST
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that is so Beautiful. i loved it. wonderful write.
Arden |
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