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Of The Dawn
Contributed by
lovingwhispers
on
Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 10:33:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Have you ever risen before the sun
Sat outside awaiting dawn
Breathing in the fresh morn' air
As the day is slowly born
Listening to natures song
Drifting through the tall gum trees
Dancing warm against your face
On a scented springtime breeze
Well,this morning on the tail of darkness
I sat within sleepy morning eyes
Of nature in her creativeness
As she gave birth to a new sunrise
Stretched out on the verandah
I rested my chin upon my hands
There guided by the early light
I looked across this land
At mountains in the distance
Just beyond the blue of sea
Where the day is but an hour old
And dreams are all for free
Kookaburras came to feed
Contagious laughter echoed deep
As there within the awakening day
I listened to beauty speak
It told of glittering diamonds
Upon the sea of blue
And of mountain tops covered fresh
In early morning dew
Painting images in my mind
As light unfolded even more
Allowing me a greater feeling
Than I had ever felt before
As I laid back with eyes closed
My senses found a place to play
They frolicked in the midst of dreams
On a sensual springtime day
Copyright ©
lovingwhispers
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2003-11-23 22:33:07]
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Re: Of The Dawn
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by emystar on
Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 10:43:17 PM AEST
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Sounds heavenly!
thanks for sharing this priceless moments.
Especially since its getting cold here in Arkansas USA. This is our coldest nite so far this season..
Very beautifull, awe inspiring write!
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: Of The Dawn
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by shelby on
Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 11:07:00 PM AEST
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this is beautiful and lovely
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Re: Of The Dawn
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 11:19:05 PM AEST
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Sigh.... such a peaceful write...truly awesome... Your poems never cease to amaze me, Whspers...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Of The Dawn
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by venkat on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 12:22:37 AM AEST
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I rise every day at 5.A.M with many great feelings..
its a beautiful poem venkat |
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Re: Of The Dawn
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 01:58:57 AM AEST
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| oh sharon! i love this and you know why too, wasnt so long ago i heard those sounds and now i miss them and someone i love so much, boo hoo lol, there is nothing like an aussie mornin' that much ill truely say, this poem is breathtakingly devine and i so love it, hugs, moosh n' lotsa love, nessa x |
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Re: Of The Dawn
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 05:36:26 AM AEST
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closed my eyes after I read and was there w/ you for awhile my friend ...slendid imagery
Shari |
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Re: Of The Dawn
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 12:53:13 PM AEST
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| Nice write. Beautiful image. I would rather be there than here but uhhh it is snowing here so I'd rather be anywhere else just about. At least anywhere warmer! |
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