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LOVING YOU
Contributed by
emystar
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Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 11:07:12 PM in AEST
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Looking to the future, I must say
Need your love today.
Souls touch accross lonely miles
needing you all the while.
Remembering hours of loving you
slowly dieing, through and through.
Once a child bride in your arms
safe from trouble and harm.
Each time our love born anew
each child, sharing too.
Struggling to make it
through, loving you.
One day we parted friends
our dreams to end.
Traveled roads, seeking a goal,
wondering where to go.
Can't find another true
as when I loved you.
Copyright ©
emystar
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2003-11-23 23:07:12]
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Re: LOVING YOU
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by shelby on
Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 11:11:13 PM AEST
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this is lovely
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Re: LOVING YOU
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 11:16:09 PM AEST
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Oh Emm.. this must have been one special love.... beautiful poem....
ugs
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Re: LOVING YOU
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by venkat on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 12:52:26 AM AEST
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| mmm.. just beautiful. venkat |
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Re: LOVING YOU
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 01:52:01 AM AEST
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| aww emy! this is so sweet:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: LOVING YOU
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by LovingWhispers on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 05:12:14 AM AEST
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so very tender..beautifully penned.
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Re: LOVING YOU
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 05:34:30 AM AEST
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very well written, so lovely
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Re: LOVING YOU
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 10:56:30 AM AEST
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Good poem. Positive and a little sad.
On a side note it is "dying" but that doesn't take away from your poem being very good. |
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Re: LOVING YOU
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by myheartsvoice on
Thursday, 15th March 2007 @ 02:36:44 PM AEST
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Can't find another true as when I loved you. " this line stoped me in my tracks, good thing you put it at the end instead of the begining. Soooooooo true. Another poem to enjoy while seeking inner wisdom of someone who's more than been there and done that.
Ben
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