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my beach
Contributed by
loopylou
on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 07:02:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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i just sit here
glad there is no storm
watching the calm waves
crashng gently on the shore
swiftly moving the sand along the beach
to some other empty space
knowing undeneath the green sea
lies sand and a mass jumble of seaweed for miles
looking in the distance i can onlly see
endless sea
here im at peace
the surroundings all ways the same
like time has stopped
this deserted beach
where the rocks are magical
and refuse to corrode
i search to the depths of my soul
looking forward wondering what lies
beyond the endless sea
what does the future hold for me?
Copyright ©
loopylou
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2003-11-24 07:02:45]
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Re: my beach
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by EmSal on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 07:15:23 AM AEST
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Oh this was nice...great imagery...a nice lovely write here. Thanks for sharing.
Emma. |
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Re: my beach
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by Korax on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 08:23:38 AM AEST
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| this is great. conjours up an image so real its haunting. |
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