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...Its the hardest to say...
Contributed by
forever_lonely
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Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 06:26:36 PM in AEST
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Im sorry.....
Im sorry i expect so much of you...
Im sorry i push you so hard...
Im sorry i cry...
Im sorry i never understand..
Im sorry i never listen....
Im sorry the only thing i do right.. wrongs you..
Im sorry this hurts...
Im sorry everythings so muddled..
Im sorry a single touch burns....
Im sorry i bottle it up....
Im sorry i bottle you up..
Im sorry i dont show my emotions to you..
Im sorry i make you cry...
Im sorry i make you hurt..
Im sorry i cant feel you..
Im sorry i never let go...
Im sorry its the hardest word...
Im sorry it hurts so much to say....
Im sorry time doesnt change me...
Im sorry space wont make us grow stronger..
Im sorry we have to be so close.....
....Im sorry your me...
...Im so sorry...
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Re: ...Its the hardest to say...
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 06:58:32 PM AEST
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The format is so simple. Very honest. And its true, went we're in distress, we don't use all those fancy words that poets normally do. You did a great job on this. I hope things go well for you two in the future =)
God bless,
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Re: ...Its the hardest to say...
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by emystar on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 07:38:23 PM AEST
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Good writing but please take it easy on yourself.
huggs, luv,
emy |
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Re: ...Its the hardest to say...
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by MoonlitAngel on
Saturday, 27th December 2003 @ 10:27:35 PM AEST
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Wow... a lot of that could've come out of my mouth... if I could put aside my dignity long enough to do so. Great write, very honest and soul-baring.
~ Moonlit |
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Re: ...Its the hardest to say...
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 2nd January 2004 @ 03:46:23 PM AEST
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strong write...keep it up it is the best way to work through things
Shari |
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Re: ...Its the hardest to say...
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by Empty_Soul on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 03:47:36 PM AEST
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Hey Luke, its john, thought i'd sign up an see if they like sum of my stuff as much as yours, wanted to read this one again cos first time u showed me it, i didnt pay much attention, this is an amazin write, i think it definitly sums up the way u keep ur emotions pent up inside like me. oh well we'll live i'm sure. lol. cya later mate.
JG.
PS: how do u put the user ratins for the poems?? lol sorry |
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Re: ...Its the hardest to say...
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by Empty_Soul on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 06:24:08 PM AEST
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| keep readin this poem, damn u, wish i had written it first. truely amazing mate. |
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Re: ...Its the hardest to say...
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by Necromant on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 01:53:27 PM AEST
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Gosh! What a deep touching poem! So sad to have few comments! Very appropriate format and it's really original. Keep strong! And continue writing this one is amazing!
Anne |
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Re: ...Its the hardest to say...
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by hawaii06 on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 06:29:42 PM AEST
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this is sad..and I hope things get better for you...This is a great poem..and I love reading your poetry....
Jamie |
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Re: ...Its the hardest to say...
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by blueheart on
Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 10:38:12 AM AEST
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| Sorry is the hardest word to say. Good job Luke, great poem. Honest and simple. |
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