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Taking a Chance
Contributed by
Clown_Prince
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Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 06:40:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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A new place to go is just over that fence.
I was told that this place is where misery ends.
But would I fit through an entrance as big as a crack?
Would I finally be able to lift the yolk off my back?
The trial is tough, the road is long.
But hey, I know I can do it if I just stay strong.
I'm pushing on through, I'm going right in.
If I just keep trying, I know I can win.
I know that it's tough, but the reward's worth the trial.
This is my chance to once again smile.
As I go on this trip, there's something I realize.
There's a chance I can't go back, so is this journey very wise?
Bah, I can't look back now, I'm almost there.
Where I can be totally free, and be without a care.
There it is, I made it, I'm finally free!
Wait... this... this isn't like what I imagined it be.
I need to go back to where I was before!
What?! No! How can there be a lock on the door?!
This isn't what I want anymore, and I can't go back to the other side.
This new place is taking the wounds I had and they're ripped open wide.
I thought it'd be cool here, very nice, very keen.
But now I see it as it is. The grass is not very green.
Copyright ©
Clown_Prince
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2003-11-24 18:40:09]
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Re: Taking a Chance
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 06:55:51 PM AEST
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To the Clown Prince,
This was such an interesting write. It's so true, we should be careful what we wish for, for it might actually come true. So right you are. I loved how it was a bit conversational. Just the style was so realistic, now too flowery or fancy. Very real. Down to earth.
You did good ; )
God bless,
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Re: Taking a Chance
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by emystar on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 07:24:50 PM AEST
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Very good writing!
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: Taking a Chance
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by arden on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 01:58:05 PM AEST
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oh yea i love this! wow this was amazing! awesome job
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