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Just Do It
Contributed by
Ewin
on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 10:42:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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shoot me!
just shoot me now!
god ****it
do it already!
I'm suffering here
can't you just put me
out of my misery
make the pain stop?
please make it stop now.
I can't take it any longer
you know you want to
I can see it-
I can see it in your eyes
don't try and hide
what you feel inside
just kill me now
either you or I
either way I"m going to die
Aren't you strong enough-
enough to go through with it?
don't look at me like that!
Just do it please do it!
don't you love me?
if you did you'd do it
Just do it, just do it!
you'd be doing me a favor
'cause i don't know
if i'm even strong enough
to do it myself
that's why i ask you to.
I know you can
just close your eyes
and pull the trigger
stop shaking
you'll drop it!
Just pull it!
Just do it!
Oh god don't cry
I don't want to cry too
don't please don't--
give me the gun --
and leave
I don't like you this way
one last good-bye kiss
good-bye my sweet
now leave me just go
I don't want you to see
Wait!the gun!A kiss!
I love you again
but just leave me here
you had nothing to do with it
ok?
you're gone good
good-bye my true love
please don't miss me
please find a better love
no, no i can't
but i must
I place the gun in my mouth and..
"wait!" you call
-i hope i'm not too late-
some reason i stop
take the gun from my mouth
you're here now why?
"Please" you plead
"Tell me, tell me why,
why would you do this?
Do you even know why?
You've never even told me,
andd yet you want me-
me to kill you?
please don't leave me
I'll miss you so!"
Tears- Tears
there's only tears
words can'r express how i feel
but then "i don't know"
that came from nowhere
a confussed voice
that i don't recognize
it come from within
the tears keep coming
keep coming and coming
you hold me
you kiss my hair
you take the gun from my hand
you unload it-
I didn't even notice -
and you hide it away
you whisper "I love you
forever and always"
You take me to your car
you drive me to the creek
we get out of your car
and sit - we just sit
you let me cry in your arms
while you say "It will be ok"
I know it's true
I hope it's true
now I'll just sit and talk to you
finallly I can tell you the truth
please.. take it in
then just throw it out
just do it.
Copyright ©
Ewin
... [
2003-11-24 22:42:06]
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Re: Just Do It
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by sugar0986 on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 10:47:50 PM AEST
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very disturbing, emotional and touching all at the same time, it was a really good poem, and very well written......Keep up the good work. I will have to read more of your work.
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Re: Just Do It
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by corrupted_minds on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 06:21:15 AM AEST
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AH! supperb! welldone i love this poem its so ... beautiful... i dont know what to say... keep it up and dont rid this world of your beautiful work
woei queen |
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Re: Just Do It
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 08:19:23 PM AEST
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| very good |
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