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Teenage waste
Contributed by
broken-glass
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Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 12:21:25 PM in AEST
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It's all 'cool' isn't it.
I'd know, I've felt it..
I've been the one standing in the playground with the hangover and the wanting-to-imress whilst holding in,
holding it all in.
Teenage waste.
All around me I can't seem to swim,
I'm in this water but I can't seem to swim but I don't want to drown.
I've heard it.
I've heard them gloat and I've heard the stories,
so this is called:growing up?
In the bush between dripping acid on your tounge,
or behind the shed- my friend got raped,
but how we'd label it 'going further'
and we still kept our smiles through the screams whilst we drowned.
Teenage waste.
All around me I can't seem to swim,
I'm in this water but I can't seem to swim but I don't want to drown.
Don't want to drown.
Don't want to grow up.
Maybe we should tell, maybe we should tell(someone,
between smokin' and tokin'...
and seeing how long you can hold it in,
you never think you'll be the one,
you'd never dream to be the one,
caught up in this teenage squander.
And were drowning.
We're not learning,
we're not growing we are drowning.....
see how long you can hold it in
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broken-glass
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2003-11-25 12:21:25]
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Re: Teenage waste
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by Broken_Skin on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 12:35:58 PM AEST
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this is very interesting, im still goin through my teenage years.... i like this,it seems different to me some how x
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Re: Teenage waste
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 01:10:11 PM AEST
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hey good indeed felt most of those feelings very well done. I enjoyed it. What does waiting to imress mean? Do you mean impress? Keep 'em coming.
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Re: Teenage waste
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 01:31:45 PM AEST
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great poem about teen years that is true for alot of them great job
peace and joy
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Re: Teenage waste
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by apollo on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 02:51:15 PM AEST
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| wow, that is one of the most amazin poems ive ever laid my eyes onto. your writing is so pure, its almost like you can envision yourself in your words. that's amazing, very well done, lookin forward to more. |
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Re: Teenage waste
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 03:15:28 PM AEST
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Dear BG,
I really appreciated this poem. It brought out a point that so many never get. The point of growing up. They want to stay teenagers for ever! Change is hard....really hard, but experience is even better.
I loved your poem GG. I think one of the best I've ever read from you.
lovingcritters
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Re: Teenage waste
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 02:41:05 PM AEST
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| i'm still in my teen years...and this is an awesome poem. |
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