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Forever
Contributed by
goodgirl
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Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 12:07:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You told me once I was all you had
And you cried
And I knew you loved me as much as loved you
I thought that I would never have to worry again
That I was safe with you
That we would always be there for each other
I thought I saw forever in your eyes
But forever is not supposed to end
What happened?
Love is a cruel joke
And so is life
Copyright ©
goodgirl
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2003-11-26 00:07:19]
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Re: Forever
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by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 03:32:54 AM AEST
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Ouch... your pain is glaringly bright. Life certainly sucks sometimes. But, love comes and goes. Clearly he's not the one you're meant to end up with, so mourn, then move on, and one day you'll find the one, and this guy won't even cross your mind anymore. Have faith! And great write, you definitely got your emotions across!
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Forever
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by doug on
Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 02:23:07 PM AEST
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| i hope you feel better now and by the way great poem your friend doug |
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Re: Forever
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 11:15:50 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC... heartfelt write..Loved it....
Hope to see many more...
Your new Trini friend..
Jenni |
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