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Tears
Contributed by
rain
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Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 12:29:48 AM in AEST
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raindrops fall when tears will not
blood spills when tears are lost
death comes when tears stop
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rain
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2003-11-26 00:29:48]
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Re: Tears
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 08:49:42 AM AEST
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| that was a little pointless |
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Re: Tears
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by M on
Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 11:45:35 AM AEST
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I don't know who posted that previous comment, but i disagree. Short, but very sweet.
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Re: Tears
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by forever_lonely on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 12:36:46 AM AEST
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I agree with emily, pointless that was not, in those three short lines, you create such an imagery that lets your imagination run wild, you speak to your soul through words on the paper and you have a gift through doing so, Short sweet and clever write :)
p.s as for mr pointless, pish as far as i am concerned, im not to say everyones not entitled to their own opinions.. but well.. pish
great write and keep them up
luke :) |
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