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i love you
Contributed by
Cancer
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Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 12:53:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
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i just wanted to let you know
that i still love you
and i understand, you don't feel the same
no matter how much i want you to
this won't end in suicide
or any bizarre rite of pain
this will just end with me telling you
i won't bother you again
if you're happy with him
then, i'm happy for you
though inside i'm drowning
in my love for you
i don't care how cheesy it sounds
i will wait for you forever
and if forever never comes
then i'll....i'll....
I'LL JUST KILL HIM AND TAKE YOU ANYWAY
YOU CAN'T RUN FROM ME, YOU KNOW
YOU CAN'T......
sorry, sorry, i didn't mean that
it's just that my love for you is so strong
always thought i'd be your next in line
i've been waiting for you for so long
but, i'll wait another thousand years
if that's what it takes
for, though you don't want my love right now
soon, you'll realize your mistakes
and if you don't, i can handle that
i'll just hang myself in your bedroom
you'll never have sex there again
everytime that you try
your mind will fill
with images of me dangling over the bed
this isn't insanity, baby, this is love
and i've got ALOT MORE to give you
so lose that hero and come be with the zero
or i'll have no choice but to come and get you
love,
me
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Cancer
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2003-11-26 00:53:50]
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Re: i love you
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 01:19:51 AM AEST
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| hmm.. an interesting twist on unconditional love, lol, i hope you have every happiness come your way pleasantly:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: i love you
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by tease_whizz on
Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 10:47:28 AM AEST
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| raw, sincere and conveying an almost violently passionate emotion. you mix vivid imagery with brutal realism and i think thats what allows your work to have such a profound effect on people. i hope she knows what shes missing out on. Kate. |
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Re: i love you
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 03:01:39 PM AEST
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wow man I don't know what to say except you appear to have hacked into my brain and delved into the deepest of my emotions that I can't even translate. I'm at a loss here this was so raw and cold it was brilliant.Hope to talk to you soon buddy.
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Re: i love you
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 06:55:11 PM AEST
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Awww.this was so sweet......at first....lol..then so chilling..lol... Enjoyed it tho....
Jenni |
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Re: i love you
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by twinkletoes on
Monday, 1st December 2003 @ 02:37:20 AM AEST
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you've done it again! well done...
Twinkletoes! |
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Re: i love you
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by jaeann on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 04:23:46 AM AEST
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| the damsel in distress in me is going right on!!!! who needs a hero when the zero has that kind of love.......makes him a ten in my book!!!!! |
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