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In Passing
Contributed by
Vitreous_Soul
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Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 06:56:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
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In passing new death is born
For this dying soul no one need mourn
'Neath reaper's blade came fatal slice
Through solitude came willing sacrifice
In passing kind words had been said
In life pure nothing, silence instead
At the end came the few tears shed
Where was this before falling dead
In passing no one can ignore
Spurious caring never had before
Wonder why death came with arms open wide
Before being buried was withered inside
The conscience of sadness a plague everlasting
Can never be subdued, not even in passing
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Vitreous_Soul
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2003-11-26 06:56:53]
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Re: In Passing
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by M on
Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 11:25:32 AM AEST
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A very sad, but beautifully well written poem, Vitreous_Soul, well done.
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Re: In Passing
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by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 12:48:27 PM AEST
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Oh My so sad and mournful....but I agree with Emy...very well written indeed.
I can't get into Dark poetry...
maybe because it seems so futile to me.
I'm from the generation where they married and lived very happily *smiles*
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Re: In Passing
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by Eve on
Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 03:33:03 PM AEST
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| I'll save the stuttering and start worshipping it now. |
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Re: In Passing
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by Avarice_Riot on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 03:01:48 AM AEST
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| Dark, but very well-written. |
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