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Isil El
Contributed by
MissLee
on
Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 11:52:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Songs from far off lands
Waft through the air
Time slips through my hands
As the wind caresses my hair
Water flows gently near by
An ancient rhythm falls upon my ear
A fierce glow alights the sky
The rhythm is coming near
The mountains majesty makes my heart soar
My soul has found its home
The wind begins to gently roar
No longer shall I rome
But I keep on wishing
For something does not seem right
To know what is missing
Before the fall of night
The rhythm is walking towards me
I can hear it now
It ebbs and flows like waves on the sea
It is soothing yet somehow
The rhythm is strange
Perhaps it is just too far out of range
Fear arises in me so fast
Could it be part of my past?
I cannot bear to see it so I
Turn and look upon a night sky
My heart sinks for all the stars fell
All of course, except Isil El
I can feel the rhythm in the ground
But I dare not turn around
It is right behind me now
I have to see it but how?
I am too afraid to look for it is so near
It is the only thing that I can hear
Two gentle hands turn me around
My eyes are fixed to the ground
I look up to see.....YOU
A feeling of relief arises a new
I see now what the rhythm was; I should
have known
It is that golden heart of yours, yet it has grown
And is far larger than my own
I am no longer in fear
Because you are here
That rhythm is the beating of your heart
I should have known it from the start
But I was scared and confused
For so long I had been abused
But now I am free
And you are my Isil El shining bright for me
In this deep and blackened sea
But my dear
I now only have one fear
It is that will you ever be
In love with me?
Copyright ©
MissLee
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2003-11-26 11:52:36]
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Re: Isil El
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by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 12:01:59 PM AEST
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| Was subtle but was well put to me. I liked it. |
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Re: Isil El
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by doug on
Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 02:10:28 PM AEST
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| very good poem, keep it up your friend doug |
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Re: Isil El
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 04:06:44 PM AEST
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I could just picture it in my mind.... awesome writing.... good luck for you two ; ) and with the holidays coming around, who knows if sparks shall fly? lol ; )
Always,
Ellen |
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Re: Isil El
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by whisper-of-night on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 08:31:59 PM AEST
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| Awwwww *weeps*............ reading it is like watching a sad romantic film un-fold in front of me....... I love it! ........definately an academy award winner! |
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