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Joy
Contributed by
hazelnut
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Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 11:41:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Her eyes dance with delight
A captivating smile blossoms at her lips
Her face radiates with exuberant light
Laughter tinkling with blithe
Have you ever felt like walking on air?
When you witnessed the first bloom of spring
When your heart is overfilled with care
For someone you love, someone who lets you spread your wings
Have you ever felt her presence?
When you give selflessly
When your ear catches a giggle of innocence
When you receive a hug in times of need
She is Joy, ever mirthful
Emanating warmth to hearts left cold
Giving life to desperate souls
Ever hopeful
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hazelnut
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2003-11-26 23:41:50]
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Re: Joy
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by doug on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 12:47:41 AM AEST
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| you should write more happy poetry cause this poem made me happy. walk in peace and love , your friend doug |
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Re: Joy
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by Kie on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 04:44:05 PM AEST
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You did an amazing job writing this. It was great!
Kie |
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Re: Joy
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2003 @ 02:37:45 AM AEST
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| Is it working? haha Chez, Teah here
okie dokie, I like this one very much. You should really consider on making happy poetries rather than depressing ones. Make people smile |
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Re: Joy
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by Qohinoor on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 11:20:54 AM AEST
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"Have you ever felt her presence?/When you give selflessly/When your ear catches a giggle of innocence/When you receive a hug in times of need...?"
Many many times :)) |
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Re: Joy
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 06:40:50 AM AEST
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This poem made me feel good after having read it.
That's a sign of a good poem, in my opinion.
Well done. |
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