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Thine Blade vs. Mine Heart
Contributed by
Sonibe
on
Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 11:48:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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....the last words I remember hearing you say
were "I Love You"....
....but when we part and I enter my room,
go to sleep, and wake up, I'm in a warehouse....
....I pass out....
....but then I hear another male's voice say
"I thought you loved me!" and "Why are you doing
this to me!?"....then he screams in pain....
....I look up and over to the direction of the screams and everything's blurry but it clears up....
....I see you with you 2 other girls and all of you
have short swords in your hands and you are
cutting at the other guy....
....he's tied up and bleeding from deep gashes to the chest and the 2 other girls are laughing at him....
....then, they do the unthinkable....and he dies after decapitation....
....you hear me gasp after watching them cut....
and you walk over to me saying, "you say you are
a swordsman....well, fight me!"....they give me my
sword (The Venus Goddess) and she pulls out her
sword (The Medusa) and strikes at me....
....I dodge and say, "You're making me fight
you....why?" she says, "You're going to die
anyways....you can either choose my blade (a
quick death) or your heart (a slow and painful
death)....
....I move quickly and snatch her sword from her
and she kneels down and says, "Kill me, my sword
has been taken from me....the consequence is
Death"....I say, "No, I have suffered the Death
of Heartbrake....you said that you loved me and
betrayed me....I can't go on like this...."
....I take both swords to my stomach and my heart
and stab my self....she cries out, "NO!" and I pass
out....I wake up in a dark hospital with no wounds
and an upside down pentagram above me....and
the words, "I curse you to live forever without
knowing what true love is" ring through my head....
....the story continues
as I live 'til this day....
Copyright ©
Sonibe
... [
2003-11-26 23:48:07]
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Re: Thine Blade vs. Mine Heart
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by doug on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 12:50:26 AM AEST
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| very creative and a nice read , your friend doug |
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Re: Thine Blade vs. Mine Heart
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by Cobalt on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 01:17:03 AM AEST
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| Interesting... It was a good write. |
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Re: Thine Blade vs. Mine Heart
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 03:19:22 PM AEST
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| really nice poem.......or is it more of a story?......only you know what your heart holds....... |
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