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-velvet rope-
Contributed by
TaintedOptomist
on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 02:17:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
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the lies run smoothly
like silk
off the tip of your tounge
now my words flow
like venom
now bite your tounge
and maybe
(just maybe)
we can have a plesant conversation
disguise you lies behind eyes of hesitation
and clever cover stories
found myself
at the bottom of a bottle
don't bother crying
(the act is getting old)
cos my shoulders gone cold
and this game has gotten old
(you've gotten old)
smooth words
and a tounge like velvet
sand paper
and nails on a chalk board
now close your eyes
and shut your mouth
so i can die in silence
Copyright ©
TaintedOptomist
... [
2003-11-27 02:17:07]
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Re: -velvet rope-
(User Rating: 1 )
by Vitreous_Soul on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 07:14:56 AM AEST
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| Very unique, both in structure and content. Good job. |
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Re: -velvet rope-
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by loopylou on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 03:29:13 PM AEST
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| i like the tittle but i love the poem |
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Re: -velvet rope-
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by Ldy_Tryst_Vampyrre on
Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 11:53:59 PM AEST
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mmmmmmmmmm...my gosh!!...you can just feel the
emotion you have 'tied up' within this poem...
i love it! |
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