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1st submission (24 hours)
Contributed by
fallensilence
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Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 05:18:19 PM in AEST
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it's not like the desire is gone
but the motivation is
maybe im just not as strong
as you can be
i think our eyes were always
closed so that we couldn't see
but like that song says
"i close my eyes just to look at you"
i guess its the only thing that we could do
to even be near each other since the
distance tore us apart
do you hurt as much as i do
god i hope so
you're gone and i dont hear from you
anymore
pushed, pulled, lifted, fell,
we've been through it all
but its never enough
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fallensilence
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2003-11-27 17:18:19]
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Re: 1st submission (24 hours)
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by garyh on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 06:06:51 PM AEST
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| interesting write.. i know what you mean though and this is kinda hard to deal with... but good things will come in the long run |
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