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The Perfect Tear
Contributed by
puppy_dog_eyes
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Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 04:26:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
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She is crying, I ask her
My sweetheart, what is wrong ?
I watch the steady trickle of tears
Fall into lines on her pretty face
I am crying, because......she turns and looks away
Are you hurt, feeling some pain ?
The answer calmly whispered, no
Then what, whatever could this be ?
I am crying, because......her body shakes
Are you sad, is that the cause?
Again in the silence, no,her answer freed
Eyes fixed to the ground, not looking at me
I am crying, because......
Someone has been cruel, thrown harsh words against you ?
As though enchanted still the same, no
Raising her glance upwards, slowly she speaks
I am crying, because.....
A half smile appears, because......
I wait with beating heart
Anticipation of what she is longing to say
I am crying because
Of something you told me
Earlier, the words you spoke
I recalled them, a moment ago, so vividly
I'm sorry I didnt mean, shh she says
Remember you turned to me in this mornings first light?
I'm crying because as you gently kissed my cheek
You said, simply, I love you.
Gone the worry of wondering
The fear of words that might not please
Replaced by sweetness and harmony
As I gaze at the Perfect Tear
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2003-11-28 04:26:17]
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Re: The Perfect Tear
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by Aika on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 04:56:00 AM AEST
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Wonderful, really, tears in here too..
love,aika:-) |
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Re: The Perfect Tear
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by venkat on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 06:20:16 AM AEST
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| perfectly beautiful .. venkat |
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Re: The Perfect Tear
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by CrystalSilence on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 07:17:34 AM AEST
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| I know these tears.They are so beautiful.You two sound perfect together. :) |
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Re: The Perfect Tear
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by poetrygodslove on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 08:18:45 AM AEST
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| a tear a woman would always want to cry...beautiful poem beautiful you.....sandy |
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Re: The Perfect Tear
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by Kie on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 09:02:57 AM AEST
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Very sweet, this pulled at my heart strings.
Kie |
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Re: The Perfect Tear
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by Sweet-Poison on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 03:56:39 PM AEST
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| Awww =) This is soo sweet... *luffs* |
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Re: The Perfect Tear
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 06:17:55 PM AEST
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as usual perfect..
Dawn is so lucky to have you..
love karen |
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Re: The Perfect Tear
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by springfield on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 12:15:58 AM AEST
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| I love your poems! I like the style. |
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Re: The Perfect Tear
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 01:12:50 PM AEST
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So beautiful what a poem to write for your loved one
I cried reading this for your title says it all perfect
Love sweetangelukxxx |
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