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Vodoo doll
Contributed by
loopylou
on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 03:00:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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a bundle of cloth wrapped in wool
with match sticks for legs
and a stony exspression on your face
laying their motionless a vodoo doll on the floor
i pick you up
i hold you in my hands
your body limp
you poor thing you died a tourtrous death
with no one to comfort you no friends
i hear a pitched scream
YOUR ALIVE
and crying
still in pain
you beg me for this pain to end
so i grab a pin from your leg
take one last breath
as i peirce this needle through your chest
rest in peace my little doll
the joys of this world your never know
i leave you to be
but the image of your torn body stays with me
Copyright ©
loopylou
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2003-11-28 15:00:05]
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Re: Vodoo doll
(User Rating: 1 )
by doug on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 10:46:51 PM AEST
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| very good and original poem, your friend doug |
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