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So much to say
Contributed by
broken-glass
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Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 03:23:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Everything you stood for......
Ostentatious and strong you wore your heart against your sleeve.
And me.......
the youth, naive, inexperienced and raw.
I loved your power, loved your vibe, loved your politics, loved your past.
I was totally amazed with everything you said.
I was a juvenile.
But now the tables have turned and look who gets the last laugh....
The infantile boy with so much to say.
I can now say
I'm just as good..
just as good as the wind and the sky and the trees
and I'm just as good,
just as admired,
just as passionate with the things I say and I don't have to speak in a certian way
to prove to the world
or prove to myself
I'm just as good.......
as you
Copyright ©
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2003-11-28 15:23:45]
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Re: So much to say
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by SkYYBLu on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 03:40:03 PM AEST
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OMG I can totally relate!!!
Iv'e been trying really hard to sum up the feeling that you just did. Thanks!! Great write, keep 'em comin'!! |
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Re: So much to say
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by loopylou on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 04:22:27 PM AEST
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| yep u tell him....no one is above any one so you hold your head as high as everyone elses....smiles well done for being so strong! |
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Re: So much to say
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 05:50:16 PM AEST
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| I must disagree we do not all operate on the same level. I liked the write though it was good and accurately conveyed your point and the emotions. |
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Re: So much to say
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 07:19:16 PM AEST
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this was different and I am sure if I was able to understand it then it would be good.
Bobo (Joel) |
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