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can you see through the lies
Contributed by
loopylou
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Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 04:20:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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somtimes do you think of me
just for a glispe of a moment
do you somtimes feel i betrayed you
i thought you knew me
inside and out
do you beleive the lies that have been spread?
do you think i changed?
that all those months i was false?
do you even think of me or have i already been classed as a hopless case
i really hoped you thought of me as not all bad
but i dont think you did because ive received no second chance
i shouldnt need one because all i ever did was make everyone smile
and be honest
i never turned my back on you
because i saw good
do you see through the lies?
i dont think you do because your expresion is blank
and im not worth a single comment
please somone be on my side
please somone find me take my hand
and lets run and hide from these lies that have ruined my life
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loopylou
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2003-11-28 16:20:11]
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Re: can you see through the lies
(User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 07:27:22 PM AEST
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This poem brings to light hurt, wonderings and sadness.
I liked it.
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