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~Still~
Contributed by
SensitiveSoAbused
on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 09:11:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Why I'm here I do not know,
they say i must go on...
at the moment its not worth it,
i feel scraped and torn
they tell me that its just a phase
in a month it will be gone
but for the last six years ive felt
that i shouldn't have been born
this feeling now is normal
-- it is nothing new to me
it is not the bad that comes and goes
but the good that always ends
depression is my way of life
there is nothing else i see
and now its where i put my trust,
not in god, nor word, nor friends
and now i sit here staring,
i hate even what i write
its just more negativity,
my artistic urge infected
this feeling seizes everything
the end is not in sight
i squint and peer through bloody eyes;
still happiness rejected.
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SensitiveSoAbused
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2003-11-28 21:11:00]
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Re: ~Still~
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by shelby on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 09:28:26 PM AEST
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This is so very sad.
You expressed your feelings well in this write and never give up nor give up with your writing.Writing is a good release, sounds like you need to come and have a hot buttered rum with me it will cheer you up! Being serious I can relate to these feelings and how your feeling. Keep on trying |
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Re: ~Still~
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by EmSal on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 10:45:16 PM AEST
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Definately not a good thing to just keep going thorugh, to see no end to it. But hopefully what the others have been telling you that it will end soon, and I hope that it will...takes time for everyone. Good write though. All the best.
Emma. |
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