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The Immortal Ones
Contributed by
ginalynn
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Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 12:01:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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For Arthur and Richard Keens
(My Immortal Loves)
The immortal ones/by my will
they were here now/such sad/
beautiful angelic faces that
I remember/both brothers/both dead
whom I had loved/with the deepest
wildest passion/unlike I had ever known
to the point/sometimes where it was
almost unbearable/I was frightened
by the depth/of my feelings for both
I never thought I/could abandon myself
that way/and have such/an uncontrollable
desire/for two men/for two brothers
whom I cannot let go of/nor they let go of me
we are bonded forever/when my time comes
this is there promise to me/we shall be
immortal together/with passion unrestrained
without fear/without sadness/without
death/barring us/from each other
Copyright 2003 Gina Dawson. All rights reserved.
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ginalynn
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2003-11-29 00:01:07]
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Re: The Immortal Ones
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by ArdRi79 on
Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 12:44:05 PM AEST
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this romanticises death I like it, it gave me a shiver down my spine, I really like
"we shall be
immortal together/with passion unrestrained
without fear" |
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