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Tiger Pride
Contributed by
norticus
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Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 12:09:08 PM in AEST
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Jenie the tiger high in the tree
watching and waiting for the chimpanzee
Waiting and watching as he scurries around
Pounce to the ground without a sound and in one gulp he's all the way down
Jenie the tiger waving her tail
When along comes Norticus the tiger male
When along comes Norticus with love on the brain
Slash rip feel the pain love insane and blood mixed with semen; the energy's drained
Jenie the tiger and her own little pride
six little kittens and norticus by her side
six little kittens playing in the sand
Black gold tan rulers of the land peacefully she stands in the grace of God's plan
jz
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norticus
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2003-11-29 12:09:08]
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Re: Tiger Pride
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by ArdRi79 on
Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 12:22:31 PM AEST
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I like this write the contrast between the happynessin the first then the second verse seems shocking, and it is resolved in the third, what i found disturbing is u share the name of the tiger
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