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Decaying Pillars
Contributed by
Cobalt
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Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 02:04:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Two souls entwined together
Both with bloody tears
Running down their twisted faces
Needing something the other
Could never be able to give
Falling down some deformed spiral
Lost souls may be found
But can they heal or be saved?
Every day should be opportunity
Yet here we are wasting them.
The book of the faulty phoenix
Copyright ©
Cobalt
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2003-11-29 14:04:00]
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Re: Decaying Pillars
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by Kie on
Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 04:45:21 PM AEST
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I read this several times. I kept thinking, you know sometimes people come together for no other reason than to help the other by helping each other. Emotionally this piece moved me.
Thank you for sharing.
Kie |
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Re: Decaying Pillars
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by loopylou on
Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 05:11:20 PM AEST
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| i didnt understand this fully but it had a depressing ring to it.....most people are more aqautances then friends i find. i did enjoy your write very good indeed. |
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Re: Decaying Pillars
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 06:11:22 PM AEST
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| I think AWAY should be added to the last line. Otherwise great poem! |
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Re: Decaying Pillars
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by EmSal on
Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 11:41:07 PM AEST
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Oh yes good write.
Emma. |
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Re: Decaying Pillars
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by poetrygodslove on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2003 @ 10:17:54 PM AEST
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| havent found one poem of yours that I had to go back and read over again to undrstand it....then i do and wow.....sandy |
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