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Solitary Snow Globe (me, just now)
Contributed by
SensitiveSoAbused
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Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 02:15:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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Solitary Snow Globe
(me, just now)
Looks like I am alone…with your head stuck in the snow globe. You sit beside me, in my solitude,
“It’s snowing.”
“Yes,” I say. “It is.”
“I believe I am pondering, is it all in my head?” His teeth are so white.
“Mom,” (this is me talking) “I am alone; what do you think?”
She says, “Besides me, your head is all in it.”
“What?” (that was him)
“Nothing, it’s too crowded in here”
“WOULD EVERYBODY SHUT UP!” (me again) “I’M TRYING TO BE ALONE!”
“Did someone say alone??”
“I couldn’t see who that was, it’s snowing too hard! WHO WAS THAT ?!” (him)
“Never mind!” said mom, “Breathe!”
“…glub glub glub…”
“What is dialogue??”
“It’s that guy again! …glub glub…”(guess who)”WHO WAS THAT ?”
“If someone was alone with me, would I still be alone?? Gosh I hope so…”
“Does this have a point, does this go anywhere? And is it winter yet?”
“Glub, glub…ACK!” {thump}
(this is mom right here,)
“No; yes.”
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Re: Solitary Snow Globe (me, just now)
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by irshprnss on
Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 06:04:24 PM AEST
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Very different. I liked it becaus it is unlike anything I have read recently! Please keep this fresh perspective comming!
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