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What could you do?
Contributed by
Bella_viola22
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Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 04:24:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I dont know what Im doing,
Im lost in this world,
Alone because no one has ever
token the time to prove that I could,
The only one who knows how to,
has gone away,
No one has token the time to make sure Im ok,
I dont know how much longer,
I can face these things
When all they seam to do,
is take away from what I bring,
The endless criticizing,
proves they dont know what Im going throw
Ill just blame my self,
though you took part in it to,
I didnt know if this could ever be true
, but it ends up that crying is all I can do
I tell my self,
someone can understand,
Then it comes clear to me
, that youll never have a clue to what this means to me,
but then again how could you?
I think of all the times this destroyed everything,
because its left nothing,
and nothing I have now
Pointless to think
What you could ever do
Because this all started with you
Copyright ©
Bella_viola22
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2003-11-29 16:24:47]
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Re: What could you do?
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 07:50:34 PM AEST
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| Nice write..but I would suggest you do a spell check, OR consider having your poems edited by mods here. There are a few spelling mistakes in this poem. |
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Re: What could you do?
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by EmSal on
Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 10:59:49 PM AEST
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Yes! It started with you...yes! I can relate to this. Good write but yeah there are a few spelling mistakes but I understood what you meant. Good write and take care.
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