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Tears Of Blood
Contributed by
sugar0986
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Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 04:50:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The blood slowly moves to my eyes,
as the pain of my heart grows more intense.
The blood begins to drip down my cheek,
leaving a red stain behind.
My chest begins to show a red shaped heart,
as I sit in my puddle of crimson blood.
As I feel my intense emotions grow ten time more.
Leaving me with only agony and discomfort to cure my heart.
Copyright ©
sugar0986
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2003-11-29 16:50:09]
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Re: Tears Of Blood
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by sugar0986 on
Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 05:40:52 PM AEST
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I think that I could have done a better job on this poem.
~Brittany~ |
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Re: Tears Of Blood
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by EmSal on
Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 09:19:25 PM AEST
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Definately something anyone would wanna go through, but many feel this ey.
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