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bruises
Contributed by
loopylou
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Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 05:01:37 PM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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you are my bruise
a cut that is hurting within
no one can tell im bleading
its just coverd with an ugly shade of green mixed with yellow
you are my bruise
somthing that has spread like a disease
somthing that has taken over me
pulling at me
hurting and aching me
starting from beeneath my skin
how can you heal a bruise
how can i forget its their
i cant touch you
i havent got a chance of making things diffrent
please go away briuise
surface your scab on my skin
let me heal those deep scrapes that dig at me from within
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2003-11-29 17:01:37]
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Re: bruises
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by EmSal on
Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 09:16:35 PM AEST
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Whoah...interesting indeed...good write.
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Re: bruises
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by Kie on
Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 09:42:21 PM AEST
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Whether the bruising be inward or outward its still there and one is aware of it.
I found this poem thought provoking.
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