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clay
Contributed by
dolly_dagger
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Sunday, 30th November 2003 @ 09:28:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Children. New clay. Soft and damp.
Ready to be moulded into society.
Taught how to think. Taught what to feel.
Watch them get shaped and subtley manipulated into an acceptable human being.
Don't go against the 'helping' hands.
If you do, they'll squash you right back down to nothing.
Let them guide you, around and around.
And when they think you're almost done, they leave their final dents in your fragile little form before leaving you to bake and dry up.
Adulthood. Old clay. Covered in irreversible marks. Edges that have been chipped away over the years.
But wait...
Look what lies in front of you...
New clay...so innocent and pure
Here's your chance for revenge
Take it
Copyright ©
dolly_dagger
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2003-11-30 09:28:49]
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Re: clay
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by TaintedOptomist on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2003 @ 12:55:44 PM AEST
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| kinda erie isn't it? good write. |
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Re: clay
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by a_t0rtured_s0ul on
Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 03:10:36 AM AEST
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yes it was a good write. I probably could have lived without the last 2 lines, but it was still good. I loved the way you used making pottery as a way of describing growing up. keep writing
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Re: clay
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 03:56:11 PM AEST
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hey ellie hun im here to make a point...good job tho =)
the last 2 lines are the point! ive noticed this as well...the world doesnt get better, cos parents take out their pain their children....
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