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Only Fantasy
Contributed by
Ariadne
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Sunday, 30th November 2003 @ 11:21:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Folded in the arms Of a fantasy That I would have Willed into reality But hope Is an elusive creature Running At the first sign Of fear And what way Is there To coax hope Back into a heart Full of fear
Would you have me Embrace that fear To perhaps Regain hope Only to have it Chased further away By that ever present monster
Or would you have me wait With patience I do not possess
Either way Hope has not Made itself Known to me
Copyright ©
Ariadne
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2003-11-30 11:21:41] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Only Fantasy
(User Rating: 1 ) by a_t0rtured_s0ul on
Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 03:03:48 AM AEST (User
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gave me goosebumps, i liked this poem.
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Re: Only Fantasy
(User Rating: 1 ) by Elf on
Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 07:25:57 PM AEST (User
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Good write. I can just see right into it. But that may be because I know what it is to feel that way. Keep hope and trust in God!
-*Dixie*- |
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