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Wild Spirit
Contributed by
Rissa
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Sunday, 30th November 2003 @ 06:13:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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A wild Spirit resides within my veins,
I thrive on being free.
You say you love me more than life,
If so, you'd let me be.
I'll die if you keep me locked up,
I can't stay in the cold.
To feel the wind beneath my wings,
I'd sacrifice my soul.
You can't love wild Spirits,
They come and go as they please.
Leaving broken hearts in their ashes,
Spreading sorrow and unease.
You've snared a wild Spirit,
Who's learned to love you, too.
Who's sacrificed her very being,
To stay, and be with you.
But Fate is drawing her away,
She can't be here much more.
On to the next adventure,
Mixture of life and lore.
You snared a wild Spirit,
But she's leaving you today.
Though unlike others of her kind,
She dearly wanted to stay...
Copyright ©
Rissa
... [
2003-11-30 18:13:05]
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Re: Wild Spirit
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by ArdRi79 on
Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 06:58:13 AM AEST
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Mmm I like the last stanza alot, I really liked the imagery in the second stanza but it dissapeared :(
I relate to the theme too, well written. |
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Re: Wild Spirit
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by Fionndruinne on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 12:14:59 AM AEST
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| I'm glad you didn't too. But it is very good. Nice imagery, and great rhyme. Keep it up! |
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Re: Wild Spirit
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by Eve on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 10:36:58 PM AEST
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Y'know, I put a bunch of copyright things on this and printed it way back when you said you were trashing all your writings. Bet you don't remember that. =D But anyway. That's how much I loved, and still do love this one.
Keep writing lest the Mightyeth Fingereth get angered,
-Eveth. |
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