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within panic
Contributed by
Merry
on
Sunday, 30th November 2003 @ 07:34:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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panic rises to
internal mutiny
bolting down corridors
blood pounds
through susceptible veins
racing to the heartbeat
spilling into a pool
of congealed anxiety
and waits apprehensively
for something to happen
out of context
process comes undone
give and take falter
always taking too much
and destroys the balance
until there is chaos plummeting
across the slippery slope
where treacherous teeth
nip at my heels
feeding on my frenzy
until i am nothing but bones
gmm2003
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Merry
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2003-11-30 19:34:10]
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Re: within panic
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 30th November 2003 @ 07:52:34 PM AEST
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Uncanny , seems as if you are writing my life story every time you put your pen to paper.
Excellent Gaille |
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Re: within panic
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 1st December 2003 @ 09:16:07 PM AEST
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| dearest merry, i recommend a fun filled day out n' some hot tea when you return home hehe, wonderfully written vivid poem:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: within panic
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by a_bear on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 05:24:43 PM AEST
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| I think they call this a panic attack. But it is little understood. The feeling is overwhelming..the blood pounding..the confusion..one is lucky if bones are there to be recognized. It is an attack ...from within. Fearful because we have no one to fight. The enemy is within and no one understands...I understand all too well and I like the poem. I'm new to the club or I would have read and commented before. |
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