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Comfortably Numb
Contributed by
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
on
Monday, 1st December 2003 @ 11:08:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Comfortably Numb
Thoughts in my mind race,
As the skies turn to dark.
Seriousness takes over,
Little time for talk.
A full moon rises in the distance,
As my feelings are up close.
My emotions take over,
Using my body as a host.
The busyness of the day,
Allows my mind to shut down.
But when the sun sets in the hills,
Reality comes back around.
Wish I could turn it off,
Stop my emotions on the run.
Find relaxation in the feeling,
Of being comfortably numb.
Copyright ©
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
... [
2003-12-01 23:08:11]
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Re: Comfortably Numb
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by harshreality on
Monday, 1st December 2003 @ 11:36:50 PM AEST
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| ME TOO!!! great write. |
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Re: Comfortably Numb
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st December 2003 @ 11:43:52 PM AEST
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You sound like a candidate for a bottle of Bundy Rum mate.
Rum, Rum makes me feel numb! (hic!)
Twinkletoes! |
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Re: Comfortably Numb
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2003 @ 05:39:20 AM AEST
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I know the feeling, Jeff... good write..
Jenni |
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Re: Comfortably Numb
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by CrystalSilence on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2003 @ 08:04:08 AM AEST
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Yeah..just to switch off and feel nothing for a while.
Excellent write and great flow.
CS
lol@twinkletoes(aussies!!...just lurrrrrrv to swig..I know coz Im an aussie too lol..not that i love to swig or anything but..oh ok..I'll hush now *smiles*)
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