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Lie Forever
Contributed by
KrysteRayne
on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2003 @ 02:23:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
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My eyes are weeping
My bodys sleeping
I just cant wake
Not for anyones sake
Not the I care
Its just not fair
The pain that I suffer
But it makes me tougher
Harder to reach
Impossible to teach
Fallen to dark
Let it leave its mark
Already lost
Not savable at all cost
Let me die
End this lie
Copyright ©
KrysteRayne
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2003-12-02 02:23:14]
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Re: Lie Forever
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2003 @ 04:14:46 AM AEST
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great write and very emotion felt great job!!
peace and joy
JENNA |
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Re: Lie Forever
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by callistonynaeve on
Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 03:39:09 PM AEST
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| Very touching, thank you |
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Re: Lie Forever
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 12:46:54 AM AEST
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I have felt this dispair you write of so well.
Well done |
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