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3yrs
Contributed by
broken-glass
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Tuesday, 2nd December 2003 @ 01:45:02 PM in AEST
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Like a new born baby into the world,
Naive to the 'industry'.
They build them up,
to watch them fall.
The broken pieces of esteem and talent,
are never fixed.
What ever for?
Why waste even more money on a burnt out career.
I predict them all at the most three years.
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2003-12-02 13:45:02]
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Re: 3yrs
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by blackteardrops on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2003 @ 07:17:25 PM AEST
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| nice. i like how you managed to capture how naive they all are and how you touched on the brutality of teh "industry". good work. keep it up. i hope to hear more from you. |
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