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Monday
Contributed by
blackteardrops
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Tuesday, 2nd December 2003 @ 02:29:36 PM in AEST
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A shadow settle over the school as Monday wreaks it's weekly havoc on the morale and well-being of all.
Empty eyes stare at me out of tired, pale faces.
Weary bodies drag themselves down the halls with the never-ending flow of monotonous every day.
movements are rythmic- eveyone is just going through the motions.
no soul.
no emotion.
no happiness.
no laughter.
just blank stares.
meaningless conversation.
and the unceasing pulse of existence.
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2003-12-02 14:29:36]
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Re: Monday
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by ArdRi79 on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2003 @ 05:35:39 PM AEST
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this is one of my favorites *bookmarks* it is exactly how i reemeber my school days and factory days.
I like the way you changed the rythm of the write speeding to the meaningless end, good one |
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Re: Monday
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by saddarkgirlreingsthenight on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 07:34:41 PM AEST
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u totally spell out morton within this peom. u have a talent that is so good. luv this and ya
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