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inner battle
Contributed by
Merry
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Wednesday, 3rd December 2003 @ 04:57:15 PM in AEST
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why won't torment lay down it's sharp sword?
tearing to shreds
slicing a brave heart to ribbons
this endless battle rages on
and i am tired, so very tired
i hear your hopeless crying in the distance
a lost child of zion
cold and alone yet fearless and brave
you gather your courage
girded for war and the death that it brings
will this day ever end, this battle be saved?
the struggle against all odds
reveals the strength in your nature
lost child of zion
take heart in your pain and survive
gmm2003
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Merry
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2003-12-03 16:57:15]
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Re: inner battle
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2003 @ 10:47:04 PM AEST
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A work of art and words of true inspiration,
Beautifully done |
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Re: inner battle
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 01:23:53 AM AEST
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I loved this very uplifting I hope you show this to your friend. Very well written and put together.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: inner battle
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Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 08:39:14 AM AEST
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| Such beauty in your words. Awesome poem! |
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Re: inner battle
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 07:50:49 PM AEST
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| excellent, interesting and caring poem, as always i love your poetry:) hugs n' love nessa |
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