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Your Goal
Contributed by
misstressdistrubed
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Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 06:36:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I try to think happy thoughts
But they always seem to turn sad
I try to feel good about myself
But I cant help always feeling bad
You seem to put me here in this mood
Where I cant cry or smile or even breathe
You have a way of becoming part of me
Running my mind and taking control of me
I need to let you go along with my fears
But you have control and you keep me here
I must break free from you and this pain
But in you I see anger and that I fear
Now the time has come, this is the only way
To end the sorrow, the hurt, the pain
I leave you and everyone else without reason
I know the tears will come slowly like the rain
I can never be free now, never be happy
See what youve done to me to my soul
Torn me apart and left me no other choice
Are you happy now was this your goal
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2003-12-04 18:36:22]
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Re: Your Goal
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 07:11:00 PM AEST
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Awesome write, I must say..... Some of those phrases in there just pop out at you. Like "I can't cry or smile or even breathe". It's one this to say I can't smile. But it's entirely different (and more to the extreme) say I can't breathe, smile, or cry. That last line I really liked too. And the last line of the second-last stanza.....
I really enjoyed reading this =)
God bless,
Ellen |
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